Chapter #4"...If I ate you!" by: Endo   "Today I was thinking, just WHAT IF... If I ate you!" she blurted out with a nervous giggle.
You had no words to react with. Of all things she had ever said or done, this one had rendered you utterly speechless. Staring wide-eyed at her impossibly gigantic form, you struggled to form a coherent word. "Uh...w-what?"
"Just think about it. You’re so small it’d be like a great adventure inside the human body! Like, can you imagine what it would be like inside my belly?” she said, placing one hand over her stomach.
“Uhh… yeah! Full of deadly acids, completely gross, really hot and probably stinky too! I am so not okay with this!” Your protests fall on deaf ears as Saturday just leans in closer. A huge and sinister smirk spread across her gargantuan face. “Oh yeah? And what exactly are you gonna do about it pipsqueak? We’re doing this and there’s nothing you can do to stop me. Besides, it’ll be fun! Going on an epic journey inside my body, exploring my insides, going where nobody has ever been before. And you’d probably come out okay on the other end.”
“Wait what? No way! No, this is crazy. It’s not funny any more Saturday, quit talking about it.”
Saturday smiled. “Sure. I’ll quit talking.” Suddenly her hand reached over and formed a massive wall on the table behind you. The wall started to move at an alarming rate as she tried to sweep you from the table and onto her hand. At this size though, she was more likely to crush you with her giant hand. Not wanting to be bulldozed to oblivion, you ran as fast as you could to the edge of the table and leapt off just as Saturday’s hand almost reached you. You landed with a soft thud in her other hand, which was waiting at the edge of the table to catch you. As you struggled to regain your bearings, there was a strange feeling like being on a plane during take-off. Saturday’s hand rose up to face level as she stood her full height.
In front of you, across the fleshy plains of her palm, your field of vision was filled by her mouth, which currently formed a giddily excited grin. “Well Alex, I hope you have fun inside me! Bon appetite!”
Her mouth opened wide, giving you a view inside the enormous cavern as her warm breath washed over you. Things started to get real when her hand tilted, forcing you to slide down and into her mouth. The descent was fast and you landed with a wet splat on Saturday’s tongue. Darkness shrouded the area as Saturday closed her mouth, trapping your minuscule self inside. You stood slowly, finding it difficult to adjust to the soft and bumpy surface of her tongue. Your eyes began to slowly adjust to the darkness inside the cavern, but it was still difficult to make out whereabouts you were due to your insanely tiny size and the lack of light.
“Okay Alex… don’t panic… you’re in Saturday’s mouth… It’s not the worst situation in the world… just keep calm and try to look for a way out…”  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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