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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #1947262
A story about a notebook which changes reality whenever you write "What if..."
This choice: ...you decide to sneak into her bedroom now and look for it.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #3

Finding the Notebook in Susan's Room

    by: Unknown
Francesca shrugs and walks away to perform some more of her duties.

"TV off," you say, and the voice-activated wall-size screen goes dark. You get up and cross the wide hallway, then ascend the curved marble staircase. At the top, instead of turning left to go through the double doors to your bedroom, you turn right -- first looking around for members of the household staff -- and go into Susan's room.

It's an unmistakably feminine room, with the pastel pink walls and the matching furniture, an elegant canopy bed the centerpiece. You were all ready to rifle through her desk drawers, dresser drawers, and even her walk-in closet to look for the notebook she'd been carrying earlier, but you spot it sitting right on top of her desk next to her iMac.

You open it up to the middle and find those pages blank. You start going backward, until you find that the only writing in it is on the very first page. It's in blue ink, in feminine handwriting, and it reads, "What if my friend Olivia and I were super hot 18 year olds who were going to drive to the mall to do lots of shopping, and also my family is super rich?"

Under that sentence, "Olivia" is written on a line by itself.

You scratch your head. There's no "what if" about any of this -- Susan is a super hot 18-year-old, her friend Olivia is almost as hot as her, your family is super rich, and of course Susan was going to the mall, you just talked to her.

It seems stupid. If you're going to use a notebook to write "what if" stuff, you should at least write stuff that's a lot wilder than that.

You flip the notebook over to page 3 -- you want to be able to rip it out just in case you have second thoughts about leaving your "what if" for Susan to find -- and grab a pen.

You write, in your neatest handwriting, "What if...
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