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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Fanfiction · #1948685

A special batch of Rare Candies has been unleashed...

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Chapter #4

Inside the mall, her friends are waiting for her

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Arriving at the mall, Dawn let out a deep breath and smiled with confidence. She'd opted to run instead of walking in order to test her new legs. The Pokemon coordinator was pleased to find out that not only had her stamina skyrocketed, but she was also faster than ever. Dawn had practically raced through the forest on her way to the mall.

"These beauties are amazing." She patted the pumped lumps on her legs with newfound affection.

There was a particular enjoyment to be found in the way her calves would bulge nicely. She liked how those firm balls of muscles would instantly become as hard as stone; not to mention how cut.

As Dawn walked through the front doors, she became quickly aware of the stares she was getting; both from the male and female populace. Of course, they couldn't be blamed for staring at the young, but obviously very muscular girl, whose clothes did little to conceal her bulk.

A pair of teens that she passed by couldn't pass up on the opportunity either. Despite thinking Dawn didn't notice, they turned to look at her legs, almost bending over as to see what was underneath her skirt.

"Damn, dude! Look at those legs!"

"Have you ever seen such a fine ass?"

Annoyance flared up within Dawn, mixed with indignation. Yes, the bluenette was aware she was currently quite the looker, but did they have to be so crass?

"What was that?" She gave them a glare, tensing her arms slightly.

The boys flinched at her tone. But what really scared them, however, were her muscular arms that suddenly came to life with sturdy muscle fibers. The lines in between individual muscle groups deepened as their definition was showcased. Hers were bigger than those of the perverts, which wasn't much of a surprise.

They both yelped, already running away, "Nothing!"

"Mhm, that's what I thought." Dawn said to herself; the satisfied smirk on her face nothing short of victorious.

She had to admit, it was fun seeing those guys run away with their tails between their legs. Not that Dawn was ever planning on hurting them, but at least that was as good as any proof that she was no longer someone to mess with.

The muscular coordinator continued her walk through the mall, keeping an eye out for Ash and the others. Truth be told, she had kind of forgotten where they were supposed to meet up. All that could be done for now was search.

Dawn absentmindedly reached down to the bag of candies at her side; they were still there. Despite still not knowing where they came from, or how they could have possibly made her grow to the size of a female bodybuilder, yet she couldn't find it in herself to look into it.

After all, what was the point? There were far more interesting things to do -- like using more candies. Dawn giggled at the thought of eating another, or feeding a candy to someone else. Ever since she'd eaten those first candies, Dawn was hooked on the sensation, and seemed to have found a new love for muscle.

Passing through the rather large mall, she came across several establishments that looked appropriate to visit, such as a clothing store and gym. The small exercise back in the forest wasn't very effective to gauge how strong she truly was, so perhaps it would be useful to enter the gym later. And Dawn was definitely going to look for new clothes. Because while she really loved her new look, the clothes she wore at the moment were tad too tight; especially around the chest. Her large bust and meaty pectorals were to blame.

Also, her skirt was showing a LOT of skin.

Dawn hummed happily as she turned around a corner. Regardless of the small list of downsides to being this size, it surprised her just how fast she got accustomed to her new, improved physique. No issues with her balance whatsoever!

Eventually, she finally came across Ash, who was sitting next to a small fountain. The teenage boy was dressed in loose pants and a blue shirt, though the red cap on his head was still the same as usual.

Dawn's eyes lit up as she called out to the Pokemon trainer, "Hey, Ash! There you are!"

"Oh, Dawn, you're -- huh?!" Ash's own eyes widened drastically as he took in her muscular figure. She almost giggled at the gobsmacked expression on her friend's face, "What happened to you?!"

"Oh my..."

It was then that Dawn became aware of the company she hadn't seen first, due to the woman being obscured by the fountain. Standing there, dressed in her usual dark but stylish outfit, was none other than her region's very own Pokemon champion; Cynthia.

Said woman was taller than both her and Ash, even when taking the recent growth spurt she'd gone through into account. Dawn couldn't see anything different about Cynthia. The expert trainer was still very pretty; long, blonde hair and a striking figure.

"Hello, Cynthia. Nice to see you again." Dawn greeted her as soon as she got closer.

Cynthia returned the gesture, "A pleasure to see you too, Dawn. But I feel like I should repeat Ash's question. I'll admit; I'm curious about this recent change as well."

"Yeah, because I know you weren't that, um, big when I last saw you." Ash nodded in agreement. He blinked once, seemingly thinking about how he said that, and quickly added, "Not that there's anything wrong with that! You look great."

"Thanks, Ash. Glad to see you approve." She smiled and did a quick flex. A chuckle escaped her lips when she saw them stare at her defined bicep, which popped up like a ripe orange, "And to answer your question; well, it's a short story, really."

Dawn quickly explained how the bag of candies had come out of nowhere, appearing in the forest while she'd been passing through, and the effect that the treats had on her body. Ash and Cynthia listened closely, sometimes asking a question like how she felt with the additional muscle mass.

They were surprised to hear how she actually loved it, but a part of her understood. After all, they didn't know what it was like to undergo such an amazing transformation. Dawn had never felt as good before as she had during the growth, and even now she secretly wanted to eat another candy; just to experience that pleasant feeling again.

"So yeah, that's basically it. One moment I'm eating a bunch of candies, and the next thing I know, all of these muscles just show up out of nowhere. Not that I have any complaints, of course."

Cynthia was impressed, "Now you've got me curious about those candies. It sounds as if someone wanted to get rid of them, or maybe something else."

"Oh! That reminds me; I was wondering what you're doing here today, Cynthia?" Dawn tapped a dainty finger on her chin, the thick muscles in her forearm bulging in the process, "Not that I'm not happy that you're here, but isn't there a tournament or something that you would be attending this week? I could have sworn I heard it on the radio two days ago."

"It's no problem. True, there was an event planned to promote the opening of a new Pokemon park in Eterna City, but we had to postpone it. A storm was approaching, and should be arriving later today." Cynthia shrugged her shoulders. The blonde-haired beauty crossed her arms beneath her ample chest, sounding not too bothered by the unforeseen hiccup, "With my schedule empty, I figured I could check up on our handsome future champion over here."

The rather blunt compliment caused Ash's cheeks to darken, and he scratched his cheek in embarrassment, "Ha, thanks. I've still got a long way to go though. My Pokemon and I need to toughen up first."

Dawn raised an eyebrow, watching the two with a wary eye. The way Cynthia looked at her friend... Well, to her it looked as if someone had a bit of a crush on a certain boy, judging by the look in the blonde's eyes.

"Anyway, Cynthia and I were catching up a bit. The others are here too, but we split up after a while, so I'm not sure where they are. Still I wonder what it's like to get buff so easily." Ash spoke up; obviously he was curious about the candies.

Dawn smiled, holding the bag in her hand, "There's still plenty left, if you want. How about you try it out yourself?"

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1. Both Cynthia and Ash agree

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2. Only one person wants to try out the candies

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