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A throwback to the fun, silly Pokémon growth stories of the mid-late 2000s, with no limits
This choice: In The morning, May is gone from the campsite  •  Go Back...
Chapter #5

The Eye of God

    by: Drez Author IconMail Icon


"May?"
Ash woke up and looked around sleepily to see Max and Brock already up. May wasn't in her sleeping bag. Ash climbed out of his sleeping bag. As he did so he happened to glance up. What he saw took his breath away and awoke him fully. It was....the sky....it took Ash a few minutes to register what he was actually seeing. It took him much longer to do much of anything than to simply stare in utter awe....and reverence.
The entirety of the sky was just an eye. An eye that bathed the world in blue light. The eye itself was blue but the sclera was golden mixed with a deep red. It was an unsettling sight to be sure. The eye seemed to be looking all around unable to focus on any one thing. It wasn't long before Brock and Max were looking up at the eye as well. The three companions were locked in place and couldn't move.
Several minutes later, the eye shifted to Ash and his friends and the three immediately bowed as if on instinct.
" Ash? Brock? Max? Why are you so tiny?"
The voice reverberated like the voice of god.....which clearly was the case. The three had no trouble in recognizing the voice. It now had a bass undertone that seemed to tremble the very air....but also it was recognizable.
"May?!" asked all three at once.
" I'm still me......i guess"
"I.....I.....how.......you........" sputtered Max.
"What happened to you, May?" asked Ash.
"I'm not sure"
"Can you possibly lower the volume?" asked Ash who noticed he was bleeding from the ears......and nose.....
" I'll try............*ahem* how's that?" The bass undertone was gone.
"Much better" replied Max.
"Guys..." said May. "I'm seriously freaking out here....I woke up a hour ago and find myself in space......and I'm gigantic.....easily the size of the whole solar system......i.....say, do you notice that Jirachi.....oh, I suppose you wouldn't.....it's quite distant to you guys.....hey you there, Jirachi! Did you have something to do with this?!"
"Jirachi the wish granting Pokemon?" asked Brock.
"Not the same one we met obviously...." muttered Max.


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