Chapter #3Magically fattened as punishment for misdeeds by: Raptor   Steele was a hated outcast who'd lost all of his popularity, fans and the like after he tried to act like a survivor of the medicine sled delivery and lied about all of the other dogs having died and the medicine having been lost, with the truth thankfully being found out subsequently.
But after that, it went from bad to worse for him, for just as he tried to go for the door that had been closed on him, he saw a female winter spirit appear in front of him.
Said winter spirit, who had magical powers, said: "Steele, I am appalled by you and your actions, as well as what kind of monster that shows you are. And, though you certainly deserved to lose your glory, fans, popularity and reputation, there is one last thing you must lose, as well, before you've fully gotten your just desserts."
"What?" Steele asked. "I've just been shut the door on and everyone hates me now, not to mention that Jenna loves Balto and hates me more than ever, even though neither of them like to hate! How much worse can it get for me, anyway?"
"It's very simple." replied the winter spirit. "You see, I am magical, and, though you will not be seeing me again after this, the spell I'm about to cast will take away the final thing you've got going for you. Namely, your fit form. I am going to fatten you massively and make you unable to walk on four feet, and only your hind ones, instead, which, ironically is so, on the one hand, you'll be able to move, but on the other hand, everyone will always be able to see how fat you are."
Steele opened his eyes widely, and before he could do or say a thing, the winter spirit cast her spell and he was on his hind feet with his forelegs having become like arms and forepaws being almost like hands in a split second, with both a great many layers of fat showing on the back of his body and, far more blatantly, an enormous, super fat and jaw droppingly tremendous belly.
In fact, I am going to give you a link to a picture on Deviantart to show you how fat he was made, though it is worth pointing out that said picture was drawn not by me, but by HectorTheWolf, and, though the character with fat Steele, Metal, is a creation of HectorTheWolf's and with Steele, I want you to look only at Steele in that picture so you can know how corpulent he just became.
http://img00.deviantart.net/2aea/i/2009/...
Anyway, having seen how unbelievably obese he now was, Steele was going: "N...N...No...this can't be...it didn't just happen..."
"Oh, yes it did." said the winter spirit. "And, before I disappear, I would like to let it be known that you will now fall asleep, and when you wake up, it will be after everyone else does, and the door in front of you will fly open as my magic teleports you in front of all of the other dogs, those polar bears and that goose, though none of the humans, but the ones who you are being shown to will be together thanks to that same magic."
"P...please. Don't do this. Change me back to normal. I beg you. I've been punished enough."
"No, you haven't." stated the winter spirit. "But this is permanent, and everyone will see and know it, also thanks to my magical powers, tomorrow, so you will have been punished enough by then, by tomorrow morning. Farewell, you selfish, disgusting, rotten waste of life."
She vanished and Steele fell asleep, and everything went exactly as she made it happen even though Steele would, as she made clear herself before, never see her again.
And, when everyone was near where it turned out Steele was, as they'd find out, Steele showed up right in front of them exactly in the way the winter spirit had described, and everyone was aghast at how humongously fat he was, unable to speak for quite some time, much like Steele was.
However, the silence was eventually broken, as the ability to speak again and thus respond to this sudden and jarring sight came back to one of the dogs, who commented on what had just been shown to them immediately.
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