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The orb is left for a teen girl to find. It gives her powers to read and modify the minds.
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Chapter #3

Doug your father

    by: DrZaaijer Author IconMail Icon
When you returned home, you found your mom, Ellen in the living room. She was with her best friend Andrea. Andrea's five-year old daughter, Gloria was playing on the carpet in front of them. She had two Disney princess figurines and she had them talking to each other. They were saying that they liked each other's dresses. It was all very sweet.

You were thinking about what type of mental changes you could do to them when your father, Doug entered the room on the way to the kitchen. "Hi Andrea, I didn't know you had come over." Doug said.

"Yeah, I thought I would stop by and tell Ellen the latest." Doug didn't care what the latest was so he didn't inquire.

Then seeing you he said, "Hey little princess." He was treating you like a little girl and you hated it. Maybe the words weren't so bad, but he wouldn't let you wear any really nice clothing, like Maggy wore. You even had a 10:30 curfew which was the earliest of all of your friends. He treated you like a little girl. You wondered what it would be like if he was treated that way. So you put into Ellen's head (and Andrea's head since she was here) that Doug was to be treated like a little girl like Gloria. While this was happening, Doug continued on his way into the kitchen to get a drink. There wasn't really any change since little girls could walk around the house any time they liked.

But when Doug returned, you put into his mind that Gloria was his best friend and he loved to play with her anything she likes. Doug seeing his best friend put his drink on the table and then got down on his hands and knees and started playing with her. Gloria enjoyed the attention, but Doug didn't know much about how to play with Disney Princesses so he had to ask a lot of questions. You decided to make it easier for him so you copied everything in Gloria's head about her toys and how she likes to play with them into Doug's head. You decided to make roon for it by removing everything Doug knew about sports and drinking beer and other spirits.

Soon they were playing seemlessly. Making up rules to games that they both understood

You then decided to make one last change to Doug's mind. You instructed him that he has to always mind Ellen like a five-year old. You also instructed him that he would be afraid of any punishment that Ellen would give him if he misbehaved.

You left the room, thinking now dad will find out how it feels to be treated like a little girl.

You have the following choices:

1. Doug spills his soda

*Noteb*
2. Gloria is about to leave, Doug doesn't want her to go

3. Bathtime for Doug

*Noteb* indicates the next chapter needs to be written.
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