I was walking one morning like any other until I heard "Theodore!" Looking across the street, I saw a mare looking at me like a glass of water in a desert, she rushed across the street as the cars screeched to a halt, as she got closer she looked like she had to be sixty with a petite frame, and noticeable crows feet on her eyes as her rainbow colored mane hung limply under a sun hat, she wore a plain pink dress, she threw her arms around me, she had to be five feet tall as her head only reached just under my average pecs, her long horn however went just over my shoulder, as she squeezed me with what I could only believe to be all her elderly might, I saw two wings flap up happily "All the years! Oh I've missed you so much! I have to know what have you been up to?" She asked excitedly her voice weak probably from age
"L-listen lady, you've got me confused with somebody else." I said as I tried to ease her down, it crushed me to be the bearer of bad news to somebody so old
She shook her head "Impossible! You're my Theodore! Look!" She reached under the neck of her dress and I looked away, looking at her figure strangely it was pretty fit, but I was drawn back up by a yellow stone she had with an engraving that looked like my face, I was unnerved by the accuracy but more over...
"What is this?" I asked
"This was on the crown of king Gortog! I cut off his arm and that night you made this for me!" She said she grabbed hold of me "Of course the years must have done a number to your mind. I'm just so happy to have you back!" She cheered happily hugging me, she must have been crouched because now her head was resting on my shoulder, looking at her I saw her hooves firmly on the ground, and I saw her rainbow mane lighten up a bit
"M-Miss, okay my name is Ted but-"
"That settles it!" She pulled away to smile into my eyes, as I saw her eyes again the crows feet all but vanished, her skin seemed to tighten against her body, and against all logic I felt her chest pressing against mine as it was creating four inches between the two of us and she was at lip height with me, she hugged me again and shockingly she lifted me off the ground as she seemed to grow! tucking my head on her shoulder and nuzzling against my head, I saw her mane seem to thicken and shine even more as I could only stare in wonder "Granted the empire fell apart after I lost you,,, I just wasn't the same ever again!" As she spoke each time her voice grew more lively and energetic
"E-empire?" I asked
"Yes! The solar empire!" She said happily
"What..." I said completely lost
"Obviously you can tell I haven't had the spirit to keep up my diet.And well without you there I was... alone. Luna and Cadence insisting that I "Release the world from my tyranny!" bah!" She said at this point she looked like she was in her early thirties
"Uh..." I was even more lost but looking down her sizable chest became two giant watermelons, looking down I saw her hips widen as the dress once at her ankles was just bellow her waist by inches as I saw her near perfect hourglass waist
She laughed happily and carried me in her arms, she must have been eight feet tall, of course the average pony was six foot four this was absolutely insane! Looking back her mane rippled against a wind I didn't feel in the slightest she smiled down at me "I look at you and every time it feels like none of this is real!" She said cheerfully
"Same..." all signs of that old lady vanished, but in they're place was an amazon in her prime carrying me off to who knows where!  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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