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Rated: XGC · Interactive · Children's · #2076484
Take the role of a girl scout, and pray that cookies are the only thing eaten!
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Chapter #3

Vanessa, The Biggest Customer

    by: Unknown
The door slowly creaked open, and Polly found herself looking up at quite possibly the largest woman she'd ever seen! At least she thought they were a woman, she could barely see anything past the massive belly they were sporting! But Polly had a hunch somebody like this would definitely want to buy lots of cookies.

"Uhm, excuse me!" Polly piped up. "Would you like to buy some Moo-Scout cookies?"

"Hmm? Who said that?" The huge woman wondered out loud, unable to see Polly under her enormous gut, so she took a step back so they could see each other more clearly. The woman had to be well over 7 feet tall, with blonde hair and blue eyes that were fixated on Polly. Her shirt was only about as effective as a bra, only covering her breasts and leaving her gigantic stomach completely bare, which audibly sloshed and gurgled with each little movement. A huge smile appeared on the woman's chubby face when she realized who her guest was. "OHHH! Why hello there! What a delicious sight! The, uh, the cookies I mean..."

"They are delicious!" Polly nodded. "Would you like to buy some?"

"Oh, sure! You know what? I'll buy everything you've got, how about that?"

Polly was stunned. That big of a sale on her very first house? What luck! "Oh wow! Okay! Lemme just see how much that is..." She began counting up the boxes she had with her and their prices.

"Here, why don't you pull that wagon inside and we'll add it all up. I have to get my check book anyway."

"Okay!" The naive girl excitedly pulled her wagon into the dimly lit house with total disregard for the warnings her parents had always given her about going into strangers homes.

"By the way, what's your name sweetie?" The big woman asked as she shut the door.

"My name's Polly! Polly Annabelle," Polly told her.

"Oh what a sweet name. You can call me Vanessa. Come right this way, over to the kitchen." As Polly followed Vanessa she noticed quite a large amount of Moo-Scout cookie boxes strewn throughout this woman's house. She must really like cookies!

Continuing on Polly also noticed discarded pieces of clothing that looked like Moo-Scout uniforms laying around the house. "Hey Vanessa, do you have a daughter in the scouts too?" Polly asked. "She left her uniform all over the place."

"Hmm? Oh uh... Oh! Yes! Of course," Vanessa stammered. "Little uh... little Mary! Maybe you've met her?" It seemed extremely difficult for her to remember her daughter's name for some reason.

"No I don't know her," Polly shook her head.

"Hmmm, well maybe you'll meet her soon then..."

Once in the kitchen Vanessa casually picked up the entire wagon and dumped it out on the kitchen counter. Polly jumped as she suddenly heard a terrifyingly loud barking coming from outside. Vanessa just laughed.

"Oh don't worry, that's just my dog Cerberus," she explained. "He always gets excited when you scouts come to visit."

"Oh, does he like cookies too?" Polly asked.

"I suppose you could say that... Now, speaking of cookies..." Before she had even handed over any money Vanessa started grabbing multiple boxes of cookies at a time, ripping them open and dumping them into her mouth! Her massive maw noisily devoured them all with ease, drool and crumbs pouring down her chins as she scarfed down the treats.

"Uh, h-hang on! You didn't pay for those yet!" Polly protested, but Vanessa didn't listen. In mere minutes her entire stock of cookies was gone. Only then did Vanessa look at the little scout again, and for some reason she still looked hungry.

BUUUUOOOOOORRRRRRRRRPPPPPPPP

A roaring belch erupted from the woman's mouth spraying Polly with spittle and cookie crumbs, and most worryingly... a Moo-Scout badge.

"Oh sweetheart, I never planned to pay for them..." The big woman said slowly, "because I planned to let you leave!" She took a swipe to grab Polly who only narrowly avoided it.

"Come here you tasty little thing!" Vanessa growled. "You'll get to join Mary in belly!" Polly dashed away back toward the front door only to find it was locked, and she couldn't figure out how to undo it in time! She had to think of something quick!

You have the following choices:

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1. Run for the back door instead

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2. Run and hide somewhere else in the house!

3. Too late to decide!

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