The Pint Puncher couldn't just give away his identity, he refused even if it meant dealing with Helen's toxic fumes, but even if he accepted, Helen would probably do the same, as he was in a disadvantageous position and any enemy would use that to defeat him.
Helen didn't seem happy with the answer, she was excepting Puncher to take off his mask, but if he was refusing, Helen only thing to do was force him to do it. "Hmph! That's how things are, aren't they? Then enjoy your view down there!" Obviously, Helen was mad and ready to punish the Puncher for his disrespect, She gave him the chance to make his punishment a less disgusting experience, but he ungratefully rejected the offer, now it was time to pay.
Helen spread her butt-cheeks, making sure the hero's nose was right under her, she took a deep breath, and the polluting air starting coming from the hippos rear, but, for the boy's surprise, there was something wrong with the foul stench, it didn't stopped coming, no matter how long he waited to the fart to end, it just was eternal. And, even worse, Helen was making the smell even stinkier by every second spent. The Puncher tried to hold on, but the eternal fumes coming from an hippos crack wasn't making things easy for him.
After unbelievable 47 seconds, that seemed like hours to the boy, Helen stopped, but that didn't mean the punishment was over, it only meant that in a few seconds, she was going to continue. The Pint Puncher knew that he wouldn't be able to take another toxic cloud like the last one, and he was also sure that Helen wasn't using his most deadly flatulence, he thought for a second that, maybe if he removed his mask the gassy hippo would go easy on him. On the other hand, Helen was already pissed, maybe she would continue no matter what. Now, the question that lingered in his mind was: "What should I do?"   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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