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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Action/Adventure · #2151224

A husband and father creates a shrink ray, someone gets their hands on it. PLEASE ADD!!!!

This choice: Nicole, traumatized at what happened  •  Go Back...
Chapter #8

a lesson learned?

    by: Marcinballa Author IconMail Icon
Steve could hear the shower running in his bedroom, which meant his wife would be preoccupied for a little bit. He took this opportunity to check on his shrunken daughter and see how she was holding up.

Lifting up the shoe, Steve was surprised by what he saw. There, near the toe section, was his daughter Nicole. She looked absolutely terrible. She was sitting there almost curled into a ball with her hands around her knees. Her clothes were covered in Debbie's foot sweat and grime, most of which had seeped through and reached Nicole's skin.

Steve couldn't help but almost be a little proud. It looked like his stubborn daughter had been humbled. "Awww Nikki, what's wrong?" he teased, as he reached into the shoe and plucks her out.

Bringing her to his face, he realized she smelled just like his wife's feet, a scent that both turned on and disgusted Steve. "So, did you learn your lesson?" Steve asked his daughter.

Nicole, barely making eye contact, just nodded. She was just hoping for this nightmare to be over.

"Okay, I think you've had enough, time to grow you back," Steve said. He began walking towards Nicole's room with her in his hand but his mind was still racing with ideas.

He knew he probably should grow her back as he didn't want to traumatized her much more. But he sight and smell of her being covered in his wife's foot sweat was something else, and Steve did want to play around with her a bit more.

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