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A husband and father creates a shrink ray, someone gets their hands on it. PLEASE ADD!!!!

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Chapter #6

Diddy Nurse Debbie

    by: The Shrunken L00NY Author IconMail Icon
From within her scrubs, Debbie gripped the shrink ray. Her mind raced with ideas, should she shrink Irina and make her ‘earn’ her place at the hospital? Or maybe even Dr. Horn, he’s such a prick that Debbie smiled at the idea of that egotistical asshole being digested in stomach acid. Eventually with a tighter grip, Debbie comes to the conclusion that she should be the hero in this situation.

“With this ‘experimental’ equipment I’ll be fable to examine your daughter’s upset stomach myself.” Debbie said in a professional manner, setting up her heroics. She held the ray out for a bemused crowd to gawk at. Their amazement didn’t last long however as Abbey howled in pain.

“Whatever you must do nurse, just do it... For the sake of my daughter.” Morgan Greston implored with a hint of passive aggression. She was a busy woman with a sick child why is she standing around for theatrics?

Debbie turns to Irina, “I need you to place a spoon under me so you can administer her treatment. I’ll keep in contact through the walkie talkies.”

Irina looked puzzled as she complied and placed a dulled, silver spoon at Debbie’s feet. Debbie nods thankfully and fires the ray at the side of her own head, instantly shrinking her to at least 1.5 centimetres tall. Irina’s position of the spoon was impeccable as Debbie opened her eyes to find that she stood on a cold, silver surface. She looked above and crouched down for stability as Irina did as she was told and lifted the spoon from the floor. She then delicately carried it over to Abbey’s parents so they could witness this marvel of science before them.

Travis felt slightly hot under the collar as he looked upon the tiny head nurse with an aroused curiosity. He murmurs under his breath, “God, I’d kill to have a tiny woman of my own...” He coughs to hide it as he looks at Morgan with a twisted twinkle in his eye. Irina then shifts the spoon towards Abbey who is currently writhing in pain.

“Okay sweetheart.” Irina says softly, “I need you to be brave. As brave as Nurse Debbie is being right now. She’s about to go into your mouth and down into your stomach to find out what is wrong with you.” She waits a moment before Abbey innocently responds,

“So... she’s a ‘Diddy Nurse Debbie?’”
The trio laugh at the little girl’s sense of humour. While on he spoon, Debbie facepalms as she is forced to realise that ‘Diddy Nurse Debbie’ is going to be her pet name in the staff room...

Irina smirks while looking down at the tiny head nurse on the spoon. “Okay Abbey, I need you to open your mouth.” Irina slowly extended her hand towards the eight-year old’s mouth. Abbey obeys and slowly opens her mouth, the vast cavernous entrance reeks of hot breath. It’s almost overwhelming to Debbie as she covers her mouth with a surgical mask. Once the spoon head is fully submerged within the girl’s mouth Debbie hops off and lands with a wet splat onto the child’s tongue. Abbey’s erratic breathing causes Debbie to slip and slide, loosing her grip as she struggles to keep away from the giant teeth.

From above, Irina passes a glass of water for Abbey as she takes several gulps. The water floods the cavern swirling and washing Debbie around her gums, her eyes widen with genuine fear. She didn’t think this through as she is sucked down the infinite void of the child’s throat... Abbey gagged as she felt the small being slide down her throat.

“Has it worked?” Morgan asked impatiently. Her arms were crossed as she stared at Irina. Irina wasn’t concerned about the parents however as she was frantically trying to call her friend and boss. “Hello? Debbie? You should’ve made it to her stomach by now. Are you alright?” Her walkie talkie was getting nothing but static. Irina sighs, realising that the flood of water must’ve damaged the Walkie talkie. A stupid decision...

Before she gets a chance to say anything, a sudden emergency alarm rings out. “Oh damn! It’s a code Red. I have to attend to it immediately. Just, stay here until I return please.” Irina jogs away praying in the back of her mind that Debbie is alright.

Moments later, Morgan approaches her daughter and lifts her gently, prompting a shocked expression from Travis.

“What the hell are you doing?! That nurse said to leave her.” Travis mumbled at the end, trying to soften his ‘verbal attack’.

“I’m not waiting around for some hocus pocus! It’s a trick, has to be.” Morgan says confidently as Abbey is lifted to her feet and carried across the hospital floor, prompting protestations from the child.

“Mom! Wait! Diddy Debbie is still in me! She won’t be able to get out...” Abbey cries out while being forcefully dragged by her mother.

“Those nurses were lying to you baby. They just gave you a pill. There is no ‘Diddy Debbie’. Come on we’ve got to go home...”

The trio walk out of the hospital after self discharging Abbey. Suddenly, The child feels a massive pain in her stomach. She clutches it with both hands and she falls over in the parking lot...

Both Morgan and Travis rush to their daughter’s side but look on in awe as...

You have the following choices:

1. Abbey suddenly grows! (Reserved)

2. Abbey suddenly shrinks!

3. The pain subsides and Abbey recovers to go home...

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