"STINKY SHOE COMPETITION!" Nadja and Jackie shout excitedly and the other girls join in soon after.
All the girls giggle with excitement and gather in a circle, whispering about who will go first. Nadja still has you gripped in her sweaty hand and you start to feel extremely anxious as you are about to be met with the most disgusting smelling shoes in existence. After they talk for awhile, they finally hush and come to a decision.
"We feel as though we should save the worst for last...can't have you passing out on us after just one sniff. After careful consideration we have decided that Isabel will go first, followed by her sister Alyssa, then me, next will be Raquelle, then Breeaunna and last and most definitely worst of all will be Jackie. And don't think that just because Isabel and Alyssa are going first that their feet are gonna smell like roses, we just think their shoes smell the least...and trust me they stink pretty bad." Nadja explains to you as you shiver in terror.
All the girls snicker and Isabel approaches you...the beautiful Asian goddess with heavenly beads of sweat dripping from her neck down her cleavage. Even as she is reaching for you, you are still mesmerized by her beauty. You snap back to reality once you realize that you are falling through the air, face first into her revolting converse sneaker. The humid air consumes you and you choke as you try to breathe the air. You find that it is possible but also torturous to do so. You cough and choke on the warm sweat scented air. Finally after what seems like an eternity, you are dumped out covered in sweat and a little bit of foot dirt. Isabel laughs at your pathetic state and hands you to her sister, Alyssa.
"Hope you're ready little guy...my feet are known for being sweat factories!" She shouts and wrings out her socks to prove her point as beads of sweat come out.
She holds you over the opening to her disgusting Vans and drops you in, landing face first into the soaking wet insole. You choke on the salty nasty liquid that is her foot sweat and look up with tears in your eyes as the taste burns your tongue. The smell hits you next and the humid air rushes into your lungs, causing you to cough from how much sweat has condensed into it. You grab your throat trying not to drown from the sweat tainted air. You look up and plead at the smiling laughing faces and after what feel like 5 years (although it was probably more like 5 minutes) you are dumped out into her hand, soaking wet, as droplets of sweat falling around you as you gasp for fresh air, the salty taste of sweat still burning your tongue. You cough and choke and beg for mercy as you are passed on to Nadja who holds up a pair of Converse that look like they're falling apart. She giggles as you stare in awe.
"You're about to find out why my shoes should be weapons of mass destruction." She laughs as she holds you over the opening.
You writhe and try to escape as the stench wafts up towards you, causing your eyes to burn. She laughs and smiles with delight as she drops you into the cheesy prison. You land on the squishy dirty moist insole and begin to feel lightheaded as the smell of stinky cheese and aged sweat fills your mind. You try to get to your feet as you tremble from the noxious odor of her nasty feet. Taking small breaths you are able to manage a tad bit of the stench, but still have a massive headache because of it. You look up with pleading eyes and after some nagging from the other girls for a turn, Nadja reluctantly turns the shoe over and you land in her hand, covered in an amalgamation of sweat, filth and stink from all of these nasty girls. She hands you over to Raquelle and you shiver in fear as you are aware of her reputation on the team to have some pretty nasty feet. She grins as she gets her grubby hands on you.
"You have no idea what you're in for!" She said, wasting no time at all shoving you into her god awful Sperrys. The moment you get a whiff you gag at the funky cheesy odor. You try to get to your feet but are stuck in the nasty foot filth, grime and sweat. You scream for help as they point and laugh. The stench of cheesy fumes stings your lungs and your thrash in pain, only making need for air worse. You gasp and take deeper breaths of the cheesy funk as your vision starts to become fuzzy and blurred. You feel yourself seeping into the gunk and jam as the sweat hardens around you. Just as you are about to black out you are scraped off the crusty gunky insole. The other girls cringe in disgust as your coated in vile toe gunk and grime. Not to mention how bad you smell. Raquelle looks at the vile jam under her nail and groans as she flicks it away, handing you over to sweet and innocent Breeaunna. You look up at her with a pleading expression on your face and she looks down at you with an expression of sorrow on her face. You light up, almost feeling hopeful that she will have mercy but all of that goes away when the all too familiar feeling of humid cheesy foot funk rises up to greet you as she holds you over he
"Sorry..." She says as she smiles softly and drops you into the nasty chamber below.
You land with a thud and tears fill your eyes before you are even able to take a breath as the spicy, onion like sweaty odor burns into them. With the first whiff, you gag and cough hysterically. The stench is so thick you can taste it on your tongue, the salty funk assaulting your taste buds as it burns into your lungs. You try to take one measly breath and simply can't draw in any air. You desperately claw at the side of the shoe in hope you'll be let out. The efforts causing you to become exhausted. The smell...the taste...the air...it's all too much. You begin to see black and start to fall over, landing face first on the grime ridden insole. You begin to pass out but are soon greeted with a rush of fresh air and light. You gasp for fresh air as the girls all high five each other for nearly causing you to black out. They all cheer on Breeaunna who just blushes as you lie in her hand, cold, wet, filthy, stinky and exhausted. You are shivering in pure terror as to what could come next for you. You scream in pure terror as Jackie steps forward. You grip onto Breeaunna's thumb as she tries to take you off of her hand.
"Oh he already knows about my foot odor I'm guessing!" Jackie cackles as she tears you away from Breeaunna's hand.
She holds you over the opening to rancid, unwashed basketball shoes and tears fill your eyes as the burning odor of rotting moldy stinky cheese and aged unwashed sweat fill your nose. You aren't even inside the shoe yet and you feel nauseous from the toxic fumes rising up to greet your nose. You look at Jackie, pleading for mercy, begging her not do it. She cackles loudly as she lets you plummet into the toxic abyss below. The moment you land on the sopping wet insole, you are greeted with an odor so powerful, you can barely move. Tears fill your eyes as a mixture of tear gas like sweaty air and cheesy funk fills your lungs and assaults your sense. Without any warning Jackie tilts the shoe forward and you plummet towards the toe section, the air quality going from toxic to deadly, as you plunge face first into a pile of rancid vile toe jam. You try to breathe but feel yourself suffocating as the fumes take over your body. They're simply too strong here and you start to drift off. You try desperately to spit out the salty filthy gunk and grime but to no avail. It sticks in your mouth like glue and find yourself soon choking on it. You don't know what would be worse. Suffocating from Jackie's cheesy toxic foot odor or choking on her globs of toe gunk. Your body becomes weak as you realize your throat is filling with more and more toe jam and you find it harder and harder to breathe. You begin to desperately gasp for air as the light starts to fade. The muffled giggling of the girls starts to become slower. You fall to your knees as the stench of toxic deadly rotten cheese completely destroys you. You fall into the pile of gooey toe slime and perish, your body solidifying into the grime...becoming a part of her rotting insole...nothing more than a piece of Jackie's toe jam.
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