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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Adult · #2211968
You were bullying your younger brother and now your mother is gonna punish you
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Chapter #3

You have to go to your soccer practice

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"You have to go to soccer practice honey!" Your mom said. Mickey then stood up as his weight was ontop of you. It wasnt hurting but it was also not very pleasant. Mickey grabbes his sport bag and walked down. Each step it felt like a big weight was pushinh down on your back. You picked up the dust from the floor as he made his way to the door. Mickey stood infront of his sneakers. He only had this one pair since his old ones were worn out. He lifts his left foot first as he was about to slide into his shoe. You looked down seeing the opening and the slightly dirty insole inside of it you werent ready for this but you couldnt do anything. As your brother slips his feet in he noticed something and so did you. You got pushed into his sock he already had cramped up inside of the shoe. You coughe an gagged immediately as the smell hit you. Mickey grabbed the shoes and took the socks out and just threw them onto the floor. You got slipped into the shoe and mickey went on his way to the soccer training.

It wasnt a long way till he was there but you noticed that his foot was already hotter than before. You were still disgusted with the other sock that was in but the smell wasnt as strong now. After a while the movement stopped as you could finally see light again. The light didnt hold for long though as your brother took his soccer shoes on. The smell was more damp and smelled foul.

As the time went mickey sweats more and more. You could feel your body getting drenched in sweat. You could taste his salty sweat as it overpowers your tastebuds. After a while you pass out from the heat that was build up in the shoe and you woke up in..

You have the following choices:

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1. His sneaker

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2. His laundry basket

3. Other

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