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An alien has crashed to Earth and many crazy happenings occur

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Chapter #8

Over the next few nights Zithar continues to ex...

    by: JR Author IconMail Icon
As the nights passed, Zithar's control over Veronica’s body deepened, becoming more refined with each passing moment. Each night, as Veronica slept, her mind tucked away in the peaceful realm of slumber, Zithar continued their quiet experiments. The subtle, exploratory movements of earlier nights had laid the foundation for what was becoming an intricate, delicate art: the seamless blending of alien influence with human form.

The first few nights had been cautious—small shifts in her fingers, slight twitching of her toes, a gentle curling of her wrist. Zithar had reveled in these minute movements, learning the rhythms of Veronica's body, understanding how it responded to their alien touch. But Zithar’s patience, while tempered with caution, was not without ambition. Each night, they grew bolder, more confident. The body they commanded had become a vessel, fluid and malleable, and Zithar had begun to crave more than just the delicate flexing of her limbs.

One night, as the moonlight filtered softly through the curtains, Zithar decided it was time to test the next phase of their control: the ability to make Veronica’s body take a few steps, to walk as though the alien influence was now a natural part of her movement.

The air in the room was still, save for the soft sounds of Veronica’s rhythmic breathing. Zithar, with the delicacy of a whisper, allowed their consciousness to sink deeper into her body. They felt the subtle pulse of her heartbeat, the gentle rise and fall of her chest. But tonight, they reached for something more.

Their first move was to gently guide Veronica’s arm into a position where it was resting across her body. It was a small shift, a controlled gesture, but it created the necessary foundation for what was to come. Zithar then moved their attention downward, focusing on Veronica’s legs. The muscles in her thighs, calves, and feet were tense, but relaxed in sleep. There was no resistance; no awareness of Zithar’s growing presence. The control was seamless, effortless.

Zithar’s focus was now entirely on the delicate mechanics of walking—the minute shifts in weight distribution, the way each leg moved in tandem with the other. They allowed their consciousness to press against Veronica’s legs, commanding the first muscle movement. The motion was almost imperceptible at first, a slight flex in her calf, the subtle shift of her foot as it slid across the sheet.

Veronica's body did not stir. Her breath remained even, her expression still serene. Zithar felt a surge of elation—the first true test of walking was a success, and Veronica’s mind was none the wiser.

Still, Zithar knew they needed to take it slow. They guided Veronica’s body to sit up in bed, her back straightening, the sheets sliding off her legs with a quiet rustle. There was no jolt of consciousness, no subconscious resistance. Zithar pressed forward, slowly commanding her feet to touch the floor. The coolness of the polished hardwood against her bare feet was a sensation Veronica would normally notice, but under Zithar’s influence, she did not.

Now, they focused on the legs, urging them to shift weight onto the left leg. The muscles responded with smooth efficiency, bending the knee slightly, allowing the body to stand. Veronica’s feet remained planted firmly on the floor, but her body was still—like a mannequin, waiting for the next command.

Zithar’s heart—or the alien equivalent—raced. The thrill of control was palpable, and yet they remained cautious. They could feel the intricate workings of the human body—the shifting of joints, the subtle responses of the nervous system. Every moment felt like a dance, an art form that required precision and care.

They guided Veronica’s left foot forward, the leg moving with a slow, deliberate step. Her body shifted with the motion, the hip moving in tandem, a perfectly synchronized movement. The steps were small, delicate, but they were real. Zithar felt a deep satisfaction in this—Veronica was walking, controlled entirely by their will, and she was unaware of it.

The first few steps were tentative, but the rhythm was solid. One foot in front of the other, the way humans moved with grace, the sway of Veronica’s hips. Zithar controlled each step, each motion, with an exacting focus. The sensation of power was intoxicating, but Zithar tempered it with caution. They did not want to risk waking Veronica, so the movements were slow and deliberate.

Veronica’s body moved across the room, her steps silent on the hardwood floor. She walked in a straight line, guided by the invisible thread of Zithar’s will. As she neared the far wall, Zithar had her pause, giving her mind a chance to remain unaware. She stood still for a moment, the stillness of sleep holding her body in place.

It was then that Zithar made a choice—they decided to try a small turn. The foot that was planted on the ground shifted slightly, and the body turned with it. The motion was smooth, like a dancer caught in the midst of a slow waltz, as if Veronica’s body itself had learned this fluid movement.

Zithar felt a surge of accomplishment, but their excitement was tempered by the knowledge that it was still a delicate balance. They did not want to risk waking Veronica, nor did they want to push the body too far too quickly.

For now, Zithar decided to end the night’s experiment. They guided Veronica’s body back to the bed, one step at a time. Her legs moved in perfect harmony with the subtle commands, returning her to the position she had started in. As she lay down, the sheets pulled back over her legs, and her body relaxed once again. The stillness returned, and Veronica’s breathing deepened, blissfully unaware of the subtle control that had been exercised over her.

Zithar withdrew slightly, retreating into the depths of Veronica’s mind, satisfied with the progress made. Tonight had been a breakthrough—a delicate test of their influence, and they had succeeded. But there was no rush. Zithar was patient, knowing that each night brought new opportunities to expand their control.

As the early morning light began to creep into the room, Zithar allowed Veronica’s body to remain still, ensuring that nothing had disturbed her slumber. They would continue to experiment, to push the boundaries of what they could achieve, until the body they commanded moved not just with elegance, but with the full and seamless grace of ownership.

And with that, Zithar fell silent, waiting for the next night to arrive, when they could again stretch the limits of Veronica’s body and mind.

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