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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Sci-fi · #2244875
You are changed and depending on the crime kids carry out your sentence.

You are changed and depending on the crime kids carry out your sentence.

This is an interactive story. Each chapter tells part of the story and often ends with multiple choices. Make a choice and move to the next chapter in your story. When you reach a chapter that hasn't been written yet, don't be shy... make an addition!
The creator of this Interactive Story provides this information and guidance:
With the increased volume in prison systems and the rise of new technologies, the government has decided to revamp it's punishment system to have the punishment suit the crime and decrease occupancy in centers.

Convicted criminals will be sent to a processing facility that will inject them with nanobots that makes them malleable to alter the individuals body dependent on their sentence. Malleability and pain tolerance after initial reshaping variable with different sentences.

All convicts will receive an additional shot that makes them resistant to extreme hot and cold, able to hold breath longer, as well as breath in low oxygen environments.

In addition a delayed retrieval function will engage for emergencies or escapes, the criminal can be sent to a detention center in human form, a processing facility to be reformed, or a portable return pad in the form last programed.

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Rules:

1) Use good grammar, even if you think you spelled everything correctly please use the spell check at the bottom of the page before submitting.

2) Only add a choice chapter if you intend on submitting a corresponding entry, don't expect others to write for you unless they agree to do so.

3) Make entries at least 4 sentences long, with exception to choice entries.

4) Keep some form of spacing between paragraphs, it's difficult to read a block of text.

5) Keep the ages of convicts between 10 and 30 years of age.

6) The age of other characters (victims or customers) is no younger than 5 and no older than 20. Exception: Someone older buying as a gift for individual within age range.

7) No death unless your on the murder story line, but try to extend their torment before finishing them off, as well as leaving an alternate line to continue the story further.

8) All fetishes and kinks are allowed as long as they don't go against above rules.

9) I have the right to edit and/or erase any entry that violates these rules.

PLEASE ADD

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After this point you can skip to the story the rest is for reference on new additions.
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All convicts are sold in a shop designed for such individuals / products. Unless otherwise specified.


Crime / Punishment:

Stealing or Robbery / Pay fine and transform into said object or article of clothing. Pain receptors off. Payment of fine and item stolen determines length of sentence between 6 months and 2 years.

Rape / Turned into a Reusable Condom, Flesh-Light or Cock Sleeve, Dildo, or Anal Beads, for victim use or consenting partner. Pain receptors set by victim from none to 2 above normal. Sentence time dependent on first use of individual in transformed form, no shorter than 2 years and no longer than victims 18th birthday.(2 years still applied if victim is 16 or older)

Kidnaping / Shrunken and given to the victim as a pet or toy. Extend malleability to allow for reshaping and/or flattening due to immense weight, and pain respecters set to minimum. Sentence time to be 3 year past length of victim's disappearance, with a maximum of victims 20th birthday.

Physical Abuse or Battery / Turned into punching bag or training dummy with pain receptors set at normal. Sentence time to be no shorter than two months to allow time for sale, maximum 3 years.

Murder / Shrunken or turned into object. If shrunken, no larger that 2 inches then let loose in nearest park. If transformed, turned into either disposable item or clothing for rough children, then put into thrift store and sold as normal good. Both malleability and pain receptors to be set at maximum, with no retrieval function. Said transformations are permanent for murderers.

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Characters:

Fitzey - Light brown hair, grey eyes, stocky build, 12 year old boy

Logan - Brown hair, brown eyes, lean build, 13 year old boy

Gavin - Dirty blond hair, hazel eyes, average build, 10 year old boy

Reid - Light dirty blond hair, green eyes, athletic build, 14 year old boy

Kyle - Hair whatever dye was on hand usually blond, brown eyes, 16 year old girl

Inna - Brown hair that is shoulder length, hazel eyes, average build, 11 year old boy that identifies as girl

Tajus - Light brown hair grown down to butt, blue eyes, athletic build, 15 year old boy

Isaak - Blond hair grown past armpits, blue eyes, fit build with gut, 13 year old girl that identifies as boy

I will leave space for original characters
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