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Lovely Ladies Losing Locomotion |
| Okay, this one shouldn't need explanation, Immobility, as it says on the tin, is the loss of mobility. This story is an archive of stories looking into female characters being rendered immobile, possibly with a fetish undertone. How can this be done? There are a number of ways, the ones of which we will allow in this story we will categorize below. Weight Gain: If we're looking to the fetish community, then the most common form of immobility is caused by weight gain, as it moves towards quadruple figures and the sheer weight of the fat clinging to the frame of the subject surpasses that which their muscles can hold, or further, as their bodies are transformed into just an amorphous mass of blobs, difficult if not impossible to distinguish between individual parts of the body. Expansion: Like Weight Gain expansion can cause immobility if taken far enough, allowed in this story are the following three; Belly: perhaps when someone says you've got a balloon belly, they're talking Hot Air Balloons, Butt: sticking you on top of a pair of cheeks the size of a couch, and of course Breast: far beyond the cup size scale, these girls will have breasts as big as beds, or bigger. Inflation: Whether by air, water, blueberry juice or something else, inflation can easily lead to the subject being transformed into a large immobile ball. Not my cup of tea but I'll allow it. Amputation: The most likely real life cause of immobility, there is some fetishization to someone loosing their limbs, allowed in this story is legs as a must if you're going down this route, and possibly arms as well, if you want to make them totally dependent on someone else. Inanimate TF: It's extreme, but obviously if one is transformed into an inanimate object, they are immobile. This could be some form of statue, an action figure, another object... or even a part of another character's body. Those are the options we're leaving, I'm sure there are others, but these are the ones we are going with. As for who, if you've looked at the other items in my portfolio, you'll know my stance, any form of fiction, real life celebrities or wholly original stories either based on your imagination... or based on the people around you with details changed so they don't realize you've written about them. Now onto the Rules First the things that must happen Obviously the story must lead towards immobility, if you're going Amputation or Inanimate it'll probably be some quick, but with weight gain, expansion or inflation it's up to you if you want something quick, or if you want to draw it out and go slow, so obviously in those cases you don't need the characters to be immobile by the end of the chapter, but unless they're growing in bursts, don't have them stop growing if they're still mobile. Next, this story is labelled as erotica, and so obviously you can have sex included, it is labelled as graphic content (one particular form of body part TF that comes to mind is the one betwixt another girl's legs) but there should be more; how the girls react to their changed lives, a possible romance between them and someone helping them, and so on. That's basically the musts, how about the things you can do if you choose: Firstly, don't be afraid to mix in multiple types above, I mean with the exception of inanimate TFs, if you're left immobile, weight gain is a probable consequence for example, and for those, once you've got one form of immobility you can have the gain/expansion for example be less extreme. Furthermore, you can use multiple subjects, and they don't need to be undergoing the same form of immobility, for example one story I'm have in mind has one girl going through extreme Breast Expansion, while another is going through massive weight gain. As I wrote above, you can include romance, whether it's M/F, F/F, multiples, or even M/M though it's unlikely those would be in focus given that male characters are not the focus. If you are going for a body part TF, you can have them transform into male body parts on a female host (we all know what part we're talking about here), you can't have female parts on a male host, as there's a no male TF rule below. Now I didn't realize I hadn't put this in in the first place so I'm adding it, you can include shrinking, not on it's own, of course; while long distance travel is harder for a girl 6 inches tall she's not immobile. However if it makes sense perhaps the other characters could shrink down our victim, to make it easier for them to move the victim about. If you did uneven shrinking (say the body shrinks, but the breasts don't) it could even be a way to trigger immobility. Finally, feel free to play for horror, unless the girl is really kinky then it is likely that there will be a degree of angst and horror as her control of her own body is ripped away from her, particularly if she doesn't know what's causing it, you can even go further if we look at a direct, aggressive instigator targeting your victims, but be aware of the don'ts below Which is a perfect segway into the Don'ts things that are banned from this story. Let's start with the obvious, this is a female immobility story, so male characters function only as either bystanders, love interests, helpers of the immobile girls, or instigators, there is to be no inclusion of male transformation,and if you wand a female version of a usually male character, then use an AU in which they were born girls, no TG either. The only place you can include men in the transformation antics is if the girl is to transform into a part of their body. Next no gore, you can have PG violence, but no blood guts and gore; if you're going the usual route for amputation then you can describe the incident, but for the most part just have them wake up in the hospital without their limbs. Yes it has a graphic tag, but that's more for sex than violence thank you very much. After that, stay light on the toilet stuff, normally I'd outright ban it, but it is a viable topic of discussion here, since they are immobile, they can't exactly go to the toilet normally, so you can bring it up, but don't focus on it. Now it has occurred to me that a possible source of immobility I have been hinting at that would entail a relaxing of this rule; transformation of a subject into another person's genitals, or into another person's butt, obviously ones private parts are used for waste expulsion, as such if this is the subject of the chapter you are writing, you can talk about urination, or defecation as appropriate, but do not feteshize it Also, no vore, honestly I do not understand how cannabalism is so popular and it honestly disturbs me a little. And no Giantess stuff, while undergoing the expansions listed above will cause the victims to become physically bigger, but no giantess TF (for a start if they grow bigger, the enlargements to their fat or whatever's causing the immobility's gonna have less of an effect on said mobility) Now for this story I'm also banning Multibreast stuff, not 'cause I don't like it, but because I have a separate interactive story: https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/2258474-Multibreast-Madne... focused on multibreast stuff, where immobility is allowed so if you've got a story focused on Multibreast TF and Immobility, go over there to post it. Next, obviously, no one under 18, for the most part you can just look into their futures for canonically underaged characters, if you can't do that (maybe you want to do a Harry Potter story set in Hogwarts, or a Buffy story using both Dawn and Tara or Joyce, both of whom died before Dawn turned 18), well simply step into AU territory, maybe Hogwarts is a college, starting at age 18, maybe Joyce and Tara didn't die, it's an erotic story about women becoming immobile, we don't need to worry about fidelity to canon. Also, let's not cling to closely to realism, for example weight gain, let's be realistic, if you grow fat enough to be immobile, you'll have a whole host of medical issues, let's ignore that for the sake of enjoyment, also, if you don't want to use magic or science, let's ignore how long gaining that much weight would mean. Now I'm fairly sure that I've got all the main rules, but now we've got on to something else; Multibreast Madness and PFP both use the typical multifandom interactive setup that we select the fandom, then the character, then the type of thing happening to them, then the specific story. we're going for something else here; while we're still going to separate the stories by fandom, once we've done that we're going straight to selecting stories, each story will be laid out as follows: Title: (the title will also be what's put in the options below) AU: (If Applicable, if not just put canon) Initial Subject(s): (The character(s) who are becoming immobile initially, you can add more later if you want) Pairing: (If Applicable, if using canon pairings just put canon) Immobility cause(s): (List here the specific type of immobility you intend for your characters, for example Breast Expansion, Statue TF, Blueberry inflation,ETC. If you have multiple subjects undergoing different changes, you can define them by person, but you don't need to.) Description: (A brief breakdown of the plot) These entries will ultimately end up a description of the plot, as seen on, say AO3, tough initially they'll act as prompts effectively, opening up your ideas, hopefully to be picked up by more skilled writers if you aren't confident writing them yourself. Below is the above template, but without the breakdown, so it can easily be copied from the instructions (which appear when you add a new chapter) to the chapter. Title: AU: Initial Subject: Pairing: Immobility cause: Description: While within your individual stories you can omit the something else if you choose, while recording description/prompts ALWAYS leaving a something else option, or else I will delete one of your prompts to make room for one (unless I happen to particularly like them, in which case it'll be transferred to the next something else.) Anyway, we're done, let's jump into our tales of immobility. |
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