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An old fiend changes the world so as to get what he's always wanted. Headswapping!

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Chapter #4

Hersh wants to retire as well!

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Billy stewed as Hersh and Marty assembled a variety of cigars. The two laughed and carried on like old friends. Granted, one of the old friends was now a gorgeous young woman in her 20s from the neck down, and Hersh's gaze lingered over Marty's new curves giving their conversation a flirtatious vibe.

For his part, Marty seemed to enjoy Hersh's leering. The most disturbing thing for Billy was the fact that Emily's body moved in the same way it had before, with the same mannerisms and quirks that she'd always demonstrated before. Was she still in there?!?! How aware of what was going on was she?!?!

Hersh lit a cigar Marty was holding in Emily's delicate hands with a match. Marty puffed away on it. "Christ, but I missed this."

"I missed your regular visits, my friend. I hope your new situation means you'll be in more regularly. And not just because you're easier on the eye than you were before!" Hersh gave him a wink.

Marty guffawed. "You always did have an eye for the ladies, Hersh."

"You've always had good taste as well, my friend. As your current situation demonstrates. You chose, very, very well. I've been perusing my choices as well." Hersh answered.

Marty leaned in, intrigued. "Thinking of your own retirement, Hersh?"

"It's ALL I can think about nowadays! And seeing how well you've done isn't going to alleviate that!" Hersh stepped into the back and came back out with a laptop. "I've narrowed down the list of possibilities to 3 I'm going to apply for. "Care to give me your thoughts?"

Marty took another puff on his cigar and scampered over to Hersh to look at the laptop's screen.

Billy approached them from behind, observing over their shoulders with piqued interest.

"First up is this little firecracker." Hersh clicked on a profile that featured a brief description of a young woman and her life, accompanied by a collage of photos.

"Heather Doan. College freshman...and apparently one of the best softball players in the country. Very nice." Marty admired the girl's photos. She was tall, muscled, and fit. But also quite busty. A cute enough brunette, she was a beefy girl, but that did nothing to diminish her beauty.

"I miss baseball. I played a little minor-league ball back in the day. I think it'd be fun to give it another wack. Apparently, those big tits of hers don't do anything to diminish her power. She's got more home runs than any other girl in the country."

"Very nice," Marty answered.

Hersh clicked on another profile, showing a similar collage of photos and information for a VERY pretty young black woman. "J.J. Jackson. She goes by Triple-J." She was curvy as well, with a clear taste for flashy clothing.

"A businesswoman. Owns a small chain of nail salons. So in your wheelhouse, kinda. I see you have a taste for women that have, what do they call it, "junk in the trunk?" Marty laughed and gave Hersh a quick jab with his new elbow.

Hersh laughed. "I like what I like. Last up, is this little lady."

"Olivia Craig." Marty said allowed as he looked over the profile of another fuller-figured woman. The definition of a M.I.L.F., Mrs. Craig was a married woman in her mid 30s who was a stay-at-home wife. "Not bad at all. Ooooo, and get a look at that daughter!"

One of the photos showed Olivia's high-school senior daughter, a gorgeous young redhead, like her Mother who was the Captain of the cheerleading squad. "Two for the price of one. You'd get the Mom's bod for yourself, and be able to bond with her hot little girl!"

Hersh winked. "I know, right?!?!

Billy was disgusted by the two geriatric jerk's conversation but kept quiet.

"I've applied for all 3. Hopefully I get matched up with 1 or 2 of 'em. What do you think, who's the one to hope for?!?"



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