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The story of how a guy gets punished by fate, magic, and a heavy helping of revenge.
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Chapter #2

Jake

    by: April flower Author IconMail Icon
As Jake strutted through the bustling food court at the mall, he couldn't help but feel a sense of superiority wash over him. He had always been popular in school, with his good looks and confident personality, and he relished the attention he received from his peers. But today, as he approached a group of school girls his age seated at a table, he couldn't resist the urge to show off.

"Hey ladies, what's up?" he said, leaning against the table and flashing them a charming smile.

The girls looked up at him, clearly unimpressed. "We're just trying to eat our lunch," one of them replied coolly.

Jake's smile faded as he realized that his advances were being rejected. He had always been used to getting his way with girls, and he didn't like being denied. "Come on, don't be like that," he said, his tone taking on a more aggressive edge. "I'm just trying to be friendly."

The girls looked at each other nervously, clearly uncomfortable with Jake's behavior. One of them stood up, gathering her things. "We're not interested," she said firmly. "Please leave us alone."

Jake scowled as the girls left, feeling a mix of anger and embarrassment. He had always thought of himself as a smooth talker, but it seemed that these girls weren't impressed by his charms. As he watched them walk away, he couldn't help but wonder if maybe he had been a bit of a jerk.

What he didn't realize was the girls behind him were done with guys like him violating their boundaries and being pushy, so they responded with their new toy.
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