Juanelo Bretado is a 15 year old 5’11 Hispanic male. He has black hair in a buzz cut, his body has an average build but has a bit of a gut.
He’s usually working with his father taking care of horses. He’s honest and loyal, but he can get easily stressed and takes things a bit too seriously. Juanelo is definitely a bag of mix emotions, well that’s about to change…
It’s a Sunday afternoon, Juanelo decides to go to the mall to look around the store to see if any catches his eyes. Then he saw a new store in the corner of the mall, he remembers that it used to be a game store until it shut down. The outside of the new store is painted black and the windows were tinted so no one can see the other side, the only that is visible is the store sign. The store was called “Swap shop”, Juanelo was curious about the store and decided to go in. At first he was shock that the store was a lot more bigger from the inside, then he noticed several headless bodies of all age and gender.
“Is there a problem sir?” Said a random voice.
“Ah!” Said Juanelo. He started to look around to see where the voice came from, then he see a guy head on the other of a shelf. “O-oh no! I was just startled by…” Juanelo is too shock and distracted by the headless bodies, that he couldn’t finish his sentence.
“The headless bodies? That fair, you’re probably new here.” Said the guy as he comes down from a step stoll and walks over to Juanelo. “Got any questions?” He asked.
“Yeah, I have a few…” Juanelo said, as he turned to talk to the guy directly; then he was shock to see the guys body.
The guy has short dirty blonde hair and a plain face, nothing special. But from the neck down, he has the body of a pale busty goth girl; wear a spiked choke collar, a black shirt that saids “Swap shop” in white letters, black jean shorts, fishnet leggings and black platform shoes.
Juanelo is both shocked and confused about this. “How…?” He saids, as he is pointing to the guy’s body.
“Oh! I should probably also explain the store.“ said the guy as he’s preparing himself. “You see, this is the Swap shop; the one stop shop for swaps. The purpose of the store is to give people a change to be who they want to be, to be someone else, or to indulge in a sexual fantasy.” He explained.
“I see.” Said Juanelo, as he’s getting interested by this.
“As for this body, I traded my old body for this one. This one feels right for me.” the guy explains.
“Wouldn't people be weirded out seeing you?” Juanelo questioned.
“Technically, yes. But thanks to the store’s magic, I can change peoples perspective. I can make them believe that I always had this body, I make them believe that I’m the original owner of this body.” the guy Explains.
“Ah, I see” said Juanelo, with a hint of excitement.
The guy giggles “I like you, what your name?” He asked.
“The name is Juanelo” he answered.
“My name is Jake.” He said. “Here the deal Juanelo, I’ll give you the choice of one thing in the store free of charge.” Said Jake.
“Really!” Said Juanelo.
“Yup” answered Jake. “So what will it be? Something in science or magic shelves? Or would like to a headless body so you have 2 bodies to your head on? Or do you want to trade your body so you can get a free item from the shelves?” He asked.
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