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Chapter #3

Heir to the Chub

    by: Maxsmith102117 Author IconMail Icon
I never expected to receive a letter from my great-aunt Vivienne's solicitor. I barely knew the woman—had met her precisely once at a family gathering when I was twelve, where she'd arrived fashionably late in a chauffeured Bentley, draped in furs despite the summer heat, and proceeded to dominate all conversation with tales of her travels and acquisitions. What I remembered most was how she'd insisted I try every dessert at the buffet, piling my plate higher each time I returned.

"Growing boys need sustenance," she'd declared, her own substantial figure evidence of a lifetime dedicated to that philosophy.

Fifteen years later, I stood before the wrought iron gates of Bellamy Estate, key in hand, still processing the solicitor's words: "As Ms. Vivienne's only living blood relative, Mr. Daniel Reed, you are the sole heir to her estate and all associated... conditions."

The mansion sprawled before me like something from a gothic novel—all stone turrets and sprawling gardens gone slightly wild. The late afternoon sun cast long shadows across the immaculate lawn, giving the place an ethereal quality that made the hairs on my arms stand up.

"The staff has been informed of your arrival," the solicitor had said, adjusting his spectacles nervously. "They're quite... accustomed to the transition process."

I hadn't thought to ask what he meant by "transition process." My mind had been too busy calculating what the sale of such a property might fetch. Enough to pay off my student loans and perhaps fund the small bakery I'd always dreamed of opening.

As I pushed open the heavy oak door, the scent hit me immediately—butter, sugar, and spice. Something delicious was baking, and my stomach growled in response. I hadn't eaten since breakfast, too nervous about this whole inheritance business.

"Hello?" I called, my voice echoing through the grand foyer.

A plump woman in her sixties appeared, wiping flour-covered hands on her apron. "Mr. Reed! Welcome home, sir. I'm Mrs. Harrington, the housekeeper. We've been expecting you." Her eyes swept over my lean frame, and she clicked her tongue disapprovingly. "Just in time for tea. You look like you could use a proper feeding."
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