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He pick up the ray again, feeling the weight of the toy gun like object. " YES. This is the house we've been looking for, it has to be. We have you now Amontillado and we're going to bring you to justice". He had been searching for this place for the last 6 month taking up after his father who was a detective like he was now. It was in the blood he thought. This father had thought that this lead was a dead end but he knew better and here he was in the belly for the beast as it where. He thought with a smile of how he was chasing an international criminal at the age for 19 when every body else his age was in college, sap's. His life was just like some goofy Saturday morning kid's show like Scooby Doo but this wasn't a cartoon it was real life and it had consequences. Life and death consequence, the last three detective to come close to Amontillado disappeared. " Well I'd better contacted the gang, Julia going to be worried sick. ha I bet sis is piss too going it alone.". He chuckle to himself thinking of his big sister cursing him for being an idiot going in like Rambo half cocked. He stood looking at the gun grinning to himself.

He didn't notice the door opening behind him or the person enter the room. When he did realized he wasn't alone it was too late. The figure slip a needle into his neck before he could guard himself. He jumped back at the sting in his neck then a moment later he started to feel dizzy and weak.

" Wha... did.. inject.. to me?"

He start to sway from side to side fighting to stay up right.

" Very good, usual they fall over by now. You must be a strong one. Hehe".

He stumble a while longer then dropped to his knee's. the figure hovered over him now.

"Yo. won. get way with this." Ever thing start to fade out. the last thing he heard was

"Yes i will" in a gleeful voice.

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