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Chapter #8

Stop dead

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Bea stopped when she saw the target for their original investigation. "Amontillado, what have you done to my brother? Let him go or i'll.."

"You'll what little girl, your in my domain. What exactly do you think you can do? Hmmm". Bea paused in shock realize now now stupid she had been, she had lead them into a trap. She looked about quickly trying to figure an escape route or anything she could use to her advantage. Panic was begin to show on her face.

"Relax Young Miss Beatrix, I'm not going to hurt you or your companions and your brother is here of his own free will. In fact I'm helping him with at his request". He gave her a sly smile.

"That's crap what could you help my brother with, he'd never let a scum bag like you help him willingly".

"Ah maybe he didn't have a choice as you put it, maybe I offered him something he wanted more then anything else."

"What, stop talking in circle's and tell me what is going on!"

"To make his wildest dream's a reality, to make him truly happy. But don't take my word for it ask him for yourself" Amontillado step aside and swopped his arm's in a grand manner with a bow ushering her to where her brother sat flanked by the two men. As they approached she thought it defiantly looked like he was being flirtatious with the two men, not only that there was a definite change to his appearance. His body was slimmer too but it wasn't that he just lost weight, his body proportion's where wrong. He looked weird to her. More curved and smooth with a dainty appearance to his arm's and face.

Her brother looked up for the first time since they entered the room, Smiling at her as if he hadn't a care in the world. "Hi Sis, glad you made it. We're have such a great time." he smile at the two gentlemen at either side of him.

"What the hell is wrong with you, what are you doing here? Your just kicking back with Amontillado! An international criminal, the guy we were sent to catch. Have you lost you mind? And what the hell is he talking about 'make your dreams come through' crap. What does he think his Disney now?"

"I think a visual explanation is called for don't you miss" Amontillado spoke from behind her. Bea looked back at him infuriated when she notice he wasn't looking at her but her brother. Miss was he talking to my brother, that doesn't made any sense. Before she took the thought process any further her bother stood up and pull down his pants and lifted his shirt. She was on the verge of screaming at him when she was shocked to silence. His body was more changed when she could know. His body was hairless, slim and curvy. His chest was small with nipple that where too big and pointed. It wasn't till her eye's travel down south to the area she was avoiding that the real shock hit home. Where she was expecting male genitals there was a smooth surface with two pink fold's of plump skin with a line down the center. He or she was hairless down there too so Bea got any unobstructed view of it all.

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