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Chapter #6

A crashing noise outside and a bang at the door

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         Elanor goes stiff terrified as Trevor pulls her closer. How does he know my name? He realizes his slip up just as something crashes and a loud bang sounds outside the door. Trevor disposes Elanor onto the couch commanding her to stay. She pulls her legs to her chest and looks hurriedly around the lodge. A small room is behind her to the right and a kitchenette sits off in a corner to the left. No where for her to run as Trevor is blocking the only way out. He opens the door looking out but no one is in sight. He shakes his head disappointed would have been much more fun to have had two maidens stumble onto your doorstep in the same night. He shoves the door closed against the rain and turns the key locking it he slides the key onto a high board above the door before turning back to the girl who sits trembling on the couch.

         He had seen her car pass his home that morning and had again seen the pretty girl go into the store in town so he had switched a few things under her hood so she might break down close by. He smiles at how well his plan had turned out and even better the clouds had collected more than he expected. A girl couldn't be so easily heard in a storm.

         She jumps to her feet. What is she thinking she can't stay here no matter the weather. This man had been watching her for a long time if he knew her name.
Trevor steps forward and drops onto the couch catching her wrist and pulling her down beside him. She screams and tries to free herself.

         Horace from screaming and exhausted from fighting, she lies in his arms hers pinned to her chest as sobs rack her weary body. Gently he brushes his fingers through her hair shushing her.

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