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One day Tom finds a strange glowing hole in his back garden.
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Chapter #8

Deja vu with a twist

    by: Preet Malcolm Author IconMail Icon
For a brief instant the female's true alien form was shown before she assumed the form of an attractive and seductive woman. Despite Tom's terror, he was inexplicably drawn to the woman's exotic beauty.

"Come here my darling", the woman / creature cooed and Tom felt himself walking toward her. Tom however recognized that he had gone through this already and he resolved to change this. She took his hand and led him out of the bathroom toward the living room. Tom realized two things immediately. The woman's touch was cold! He gasped as he also realized that what he thought was his familiar bedroom was nothing but an illusion created by the aliens for his benefit. Now as he was being led toward the living room, the bathroom and his bedroom disintegrated and were replaced with plain gray space with nothing else to distinguish it.

Tom whispered "this is not real. This is not real". As he did so, the hypnotic hold of the alien creature on him was broken and Tom saw the creature's true form, every slimy, slithering detail. Tom desperately wished for another hole.

"This is not real. This is not real", Tom repeated aloud and all the creatures assembled in the "living room" began to flicker, as though they were intangible light. As the surroundings transformed, Tom realized with surprise that he was still in a portal and had never actually emerged since he ran away from the alternative "family" toward a hole.

Tom felt the pull of the portal and the sensation of falling. He was still a little confused and anxious, not knowing where and how he will end up.

You have the following choices:

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1. Back to his original reality

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2. Another, strange reality

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