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 | Writing At WDC!!  [E] My fifth assignment! Lesson #1: Rictameter...  |
| (4.5)| ** Image ID #1607334 Unavailable ** Hello! mARi😭DiagnosedDepression My name is omniblueeyes  I am pleased to have the honor of reading a piece of your writing. Disclaimer: I am not a professional editor, I am simply a reader. My intent is to share my humble opinion of your work with you. It is my sincere hope that you will find something useful in my review and disregard what you do not agree with.  Overall Impression: A poem writing about WDC and the writing inspired by being a member. I think WDC awakens many of our muses.  Setting and Plot/Structure and Form:I know you are using some formal structures in regards to the poetry in this folder. I would be great if you noted exactly what the rules are to the form. It is difficult to review and rate how well you did with the poem without having to look up the form. It would be great incentive to have that handy so others could try the form themselves.  Punctuation, Spelling, and Grammar:Looks great!  Favorite Parts:I love the different colors. Prettiful! The pencil in my hand; seemingly having its own will, moves across the blank page, expressing thoughts. Within an instant, like magic, the passion is fulfilled. It is magic how most poetry is formed. If good, it makes us feel something and when written well, it makes others feel or understand out own emotion. This was a beautiful verse.  Suggestions:Just to list the form used as suggested above.  Parting Thoughts:I liked this short poem. I also love the at the top of the folder, you linked the place where you are taking these classes. I definitely need to sign up!  Rating:  
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You responded to this review 11/18/2009 @ 5:07pm EST