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It took me a minute to figure out why you kept referring to yourself as 'his mother'. LOL! It might help if in the beginning of the story, you tell us this was written by your husband.

He is a very good writer. I am glad to hear his views as he shares this experience with you, of both dealing with Jackson's condition and in journaling the experience for others.

This was very informative. It is very neat how a reader can pick any of the stories in this folder and they all seem to have enough information about Jackson to stand on their own. You do not have to start from the beginning entry to know what your family is dealing with, what Jackson is dealing with.

Spelling, grammar, and punctuation, as always, are well done.

Another great piece, this time from Michelle's husband, Brian.
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