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*Heart*Brief Summary:*Heart*
When the children offer up suggestions, it is best to hear what is being said. Sometimes we need to read between the lines a bit, and others are as plain as day.


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~LAW ONE:With only four days aloud for school, a week, does this then change the day to a 10 or 12 hour day? Or, does it simply take out the extra-curricular activities and electives, concentrating solely on the basics to get them through?

~LAW TWO:With vacations for summer and spring, does this eliminate all other vacation, or is this in conjunction with the others? Either way, the question then remains, how long of a break do they get and how will it interfere with their four day weeks?

~LAW THREE: Video games are easier to play and E and E+10 ratings only. I think this is one of my favorites. To me, this takes the violence out of video games. No video game can now be created which would maintain a rating higher than E+10. How cool is that for us parents. No more worrying about the content.

~LAW FOUR:Now on this one, is there not already an unspoken rule or law? All restaurants have salt, how can they call themselves restaurants if they don't have the proper tools to make them so? If this need be a law, then the restaurant that sparked this idea needs a better looking at.

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All of these potential laws create a thought provoking debate. All can be easily fought for or against with great merit. I think what I liked best is that a ten year old was ready to decide what was important to him/her.



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