Welcome to WDC and thanks for sharing your tender and loving poem that I found on the Simply Positive Newbie Review Page!

You have so clearly stated your feelings in this free form style of writing. The pink is a good colour as it stands for love. I can feel the regret and longing that underscores your words. The repeating of the word "Home" says it all.

I really like the second line with its internal rhyme.

Suggestions from my perspective only.

While the capital letters seem to emphasize your sentiments I feel it would be more visually appealing if you used natural script. The pink already stands out.
I wonder if you could divide the work into stanzas of 4 lines each for emphasis and visual appeal.

Good job! Keep on doing what you do and write on! Light on the path, Eyestar
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