I love this poem, an awesome tribute to the stars! I, too, am a stargazer! Your writing flows along at good pace and has some lovely rhymes and word choices. The first two verses are my favourites and the off rhyme in the first two lines of the last verse are interesting.

I can really feel the awe the speaker has for stars and how she wishes everyone could see their immense influence. It's like she just can't understand it!

A few things I noticed for your consideration:

"night sky" is two words.
You don't need a comma after "heart" in stanza 2.
In stanza 3, you use two "but" phrases close together--maybe say " they just don't see"
Drop the comma after "reason" in verse 5
I don't think you need "then and maybe' together in the last verse. It would be more potent to drop maybe and add certainty to your vision of what could be.
The word "than" should be in the next line so the rhyme works. (typo likely)
The rhythm is off in places but it doesn't take away from the concept of the piece.

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Awesome writing that drew me in from the first line! Keep on writing and following your star! Welcome to WDC and thanks for sharing! Light on the path, Eyestar