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SOARING PACKAGE REVIEW


Changing my format for reviews.
DISCLAIMER: This comes to you as a reader would see your work. I have only my opinion to offer. Sometimes I might find a bit of your work I thought that I might express feelings about. If it struck a cord etc. If there should be such an entry under 'EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK' that is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.


TITLE: Fits the content well.


IMAGERY: Good and vivid. Apparently the character s trapped in a coffin and someone should be checking on it. There is suppose to be a release hatch but it wont work. A new invention that is giving the character concern and could eventually cause his death.



EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK: First of all dont end up in a coffin trying out a new gimmic. Next dont end up in a coffin unless you are already dead.


INTERPRETATION: What a mess. A bit funny and yet distrubing. Someone is always coming up with something new; just so it doesnt cause the death of you.HA!!!


COMPLEXITY: Will someone come to the rescue or not?


TONE: Good depth of feelings. Scared and trapped. A release that wont work. I'm sure panic is almost taking over the character.


SPELLING ERRORS: None found.


FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good


OVERALL: Good read. Please keep sharing.

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