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SOARING PACKAGE REVIEW

Changing my format for reviews.
DISCLAIMER: This comes to you as a reader would see your work. I have only my opinion to offer. Sometimes I might find a bit of your work I thought that I might express feelings about. If it struck a cord etc. If there should be such an entry under 'EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK' that is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.


TITLE: Fits the content well.


IMAGERY: Good and vivid. Poor Frank venting a bit about his life in general. Who could blame the guy when he is big time ugly. He has no social life and a wife no one would die for. She screams at him all the time and is one ugly chick.



EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK: Realizing the life of a guy like that can make a person cry. Even plasic surgery wouldnt make him the apple of anyones eye.


INTERPRETATION: We cant tell him things will be better because obviously they wont.


COMPLEXITY: Living life 'all mixed up' with several guys 'parts' to play cant be easy.HA!!!!!!


TONE: Good depth of feelings. A good piece. An enjoyable read. Lighthearted and indeed a treat.


SPELLING ERRORS: None found.


FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good


OVERALL: Good read. Very clever. Please keep sharing.

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