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SOARING PACKAGE REVIEW


Changing my format for reviews.
DISCLAIMER: This comes to you as a reader would see your work. I have only my opinion to offer. Sometimes I might find a bit of your work I thought that I might express feelings about. If it struck a cord etc. If there should be such an entry under 'EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK' that is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.


TITLE: Fits the content well.


IMAGERY: Good and vivid. A witch with a son is making trouble in Chile. The boy goes wild and makes a tourist do silly things. He makes him dance and is in a trance. He carries a big red chicken around. The man falls in sewage and the town thinks he stinks.



EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK: Poor guy on a trip literally trips in s---t.


INTERPRETATION: Never go to Chile and if you do stay away from the mountains.



TONE: Good depth of feelings. A bit scarey because the boy has such power. Makes one wonder what he has up his sleeve next. Lighthearted piece. Good job with this. Funny.


SPELLING ERRORS: None found


FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good


OVERALL: Good read. Please keep sharing.

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