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SOARING PACKAGE REVIEW


Changing my format for reviews.
DISCLAIMER: This comes to you as a reader would see your work. I have only my opinion to offer. Sometimes I might find a bit of your work I thought that I might express feelings about. If it struck a cord etc. If there should be such an entry under 'EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK' that is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.


TITLE: Fits the content well.


IMAGERY: Good and vivid. A woman having a bad night expresses her feelings in this piece. She apparently has a monster under head bed and in her head. When the morning comes she finds a tequila monster bottle under her bed. Now she needs to get more to keep her from feeling sick.



INTERPRETATION: Maybe a bit too much to drink making it hard to logically think.


COMPLEXITY: Trying to rid herself of a demon. Going out to by more will only bring on that familiar feelings.


TONE: Good depth of feelings. Suffering is felt. She is distracted. She has an active imagination that seems to really take hold when drinking.


SPELLING ERRORS: None found.


FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good


OVERALL: Good read. Please keep sharing.

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