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SOARING PACKAGE REVIEW


Changing my format for reviews.
DISCLAIMER: This comes to you as a reader would see your work. I have only my opinion to offer. Sometimes I might find a bit of your work I thought that I might express feelings about. If it struck a cord etc. If there should be such an entry under 'EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK' that is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.


TITLE: Fits the content well.


IMAGERY: Good and vivid. A man explains how a tree that has been part of his environment for 25 years is slowly whithering away. The character tried to nurture the tree and help it weather the storms but as time went along the other trees started sapping its strength. Finally the tree is cut down and the character has indeed lost a friend.



EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK: Looking at this a different way. Think of it about a human. How over time mixing with the wrong crowd; ones life can become a big mess. Loosing a good path to follow and being misdirected and following their lead. Will eventually cause him to loose part of himself in the process. Man is to stand tall on his own two feet. Stand as strong as the trees and reach for the heavens. If the man is lost he will forget where his arms go.



TONE: Good depth of feelings. A bit of sadness is felt. Loss of a friend is apparent. A bit of grief is felt.


SPELLING ERRORS: None found.


FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good


OVERALL: Good read. Please keep sharing.

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