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SOARING PACKAGE REVIEW

Changing my format for reviews.
DISCLAIMER: This comes to you as a reader would see your work. I have only my opinion to offer. Sometimes I might find a bit of your work I thought that I might express feelings about. If it struck a cord etc. If there should be such an entry under 'EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK' that is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.


TITLE: Fits the content well.


IMAGERY: Good and vivid. The author speaks of how life goes on. How we are just a 'drop' of water in the whole scheme of things. How even though we might feel important; our stay is short. Unfortunately during the stay of man there is so much destruction. Each generation seems to impact the life around us. Even the earth is effected by this small 'drop'. The natural disasters cant compare to the disasters man himself has created.



EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK: Once we are gone then what? Good part;

Eventually the day comes for your own demise.
You are mourned and buried, becoming just a
memory to be carried by a few... yet life goes on.


COMPLEXITY: How much do we really matter? Good part;

Life on earth is persistant and permanent, ever-
changing but ever-constant.


TONE: Good depth of feelings.


SPELLING ERRORS: None found.


FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good


OVERALL: Good read. Please keep sharing.

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