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Title: Song of the Graduate, it works, but it sounds like the highschool class isn't the only thing coming to an end. Is the school closing?
Description: I would have loved seeing you read this to your audience
Contents: You've written a mournful poem, not of hope and new beginnings as most graduation pieces are, but one of sadness, tinged with remorse. There is a certain sadness in your words. It leaves the reader wondering- was high school grand, and leaving it so hard, or was it a hard experience and the future with the world the way it is now, not looking much better. I'll have to think on that a while.
Thumbs up:
''There is no individuality when everyone,
Becomes a singular anonymous person,
We sand in shades of purple,
Walking through schoolroom blues,
We walked with a purpose,
Through the hallways to the streets," powerful words to express how you feel about leaving your alma mater.

Conventions: sp- performed, crowed windows? did you mean crowd?
We sand in shades of purple? stand?

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Amay