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Title: I'm assuming the cat's name is Flower?
Description: To live the life of a well cared for cat, wouldn't we all love that!
Contents: Your poem about your cat is cute, and reminds me of days gone by and my neighbor's cats.
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Conventions:The first six lines rhyme and if you put 'not even in a crisis' with the line about it, that will make another set of rhyming lines.
The following comments--- just think about. You don't have to do anything with them if you don't want to.....
He is my kitty, and i love him, >> add the word 'so' after him

The sun warms him kindly,>>> you could add, 'while he purrs low,>>>>> that would continue your rhyming format.???

While he dreams about nothing..


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Amay