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Title: Losing You - seems appropriate
Description: Your description reads from one point of view, but your poem reads from the dying's point of view
Contents: To this reader, your poem sounds like a deathbed goodbye, I'll be gone, but you have to have the strength to carry on is the message I'm picking up on.
Thumbs up: "i love you so dearly i maybe gone for now, but just maybe we will share that touch"
powerful words
Conventions: You've written your poem in a centered format, I think you could actually break some of the longer lines to show where natural pauses occur. See below>

I may be done
This could be my goodbyes
You may feel alone
but really
I will always be with you
I will hear your cries--- I don't know if you want to change anything. This is only an idea that popped into my head, you can take it or tell me to shove off. No offense would be taken. After all, this is from your heart. You have to make up your mind what you want to do with it.

Personal pet peeve: capitalize I. I can't help it, my teachers drummed that in my head and I guess I'm continuing that legacy.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.