Welcome to WDC. I hope you will enjoy the time you spend here sharing your work with others. I know I've learned a lot over the past year. It's nice to find a safe place to grow in your craft.
Title: Nice, fits the lyrics
Description: This is where you catch your reader's attention. It is a hook to draw someone in to read your work. It is an area that I find the most challenging to write, but I do put the effort in to make someone that's just floating around on WDC, want to stop and pick a poem or story to read it. Who knows, they may have a suggestion that would kick my work up a notch or two.
Contents: Your words seem to float with a rhythm of their own. I can almost hear steel drums in the back ground, feel the sand between my toes, and where is my cold rum drink???
Thumbs up: your bridge, sums up the feelings of love so true.
Conventions: Pet Peeve- it's mine and I accept it as just a part of me.. Capitalize the pronoun I.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Amay