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Title: It's cool when the title of a poem isn't the first line. Nicely done. Of course, it doesn't work all the time. Writing is never that simple.
Description: hooks the reader to find out what lies are controlling you
Contents: A poem full of imagery, that some may not understand. But poetry is from the heart of the writer and their experience.
Thumbs up:
Like my face in the
Mirror,
When I look at you.
Not a lie,
a distortion of truth.
My eyes aren't blue.
Conventions: I didn't see anything that caught my eye.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.