Welcome to WDC. I hope you will enjoy the time you spend here sharing your work with others. I know I've learned a lot over the past year. It's nice to find a safe place to grow in your craft.

Title: fits the poem well

Description: tells more about your state of mind than your lines.... this is a place to entice other people to come in and look at your work. Your words are from your heart, let your description come from the same place

Contents: Disappointments in life give writers a canvas to paint upon. Strong emotions bring powerful poetry from each of us. You've tapped into feelings and presented a situation where life's difficulties are stepping stones on to something else, leaving behind the pain and destruction.

Thumbs up: And pave my way with fragments of broken trust-- shows the power to get up and move on. insightful line.

Conventions: none noted.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.


Amay