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Title: Are You Dreaming? Fits your poem very well.
Description: Amen! I think I even said that outloud. I love a good rabel rousin'!
Contents: Your poem calls for citizens to wake up and smell the coffee. Tap into the history, pull out the characteristics that made this country great. I love the way you tell what's wrong, and give what its going to take to make a feasible solution.
Thumbs up:
lift the veil, i can see it through
are you living or are you dreaming
unlock my cell, seek the truth
you must be dreaming (you must be dreaming)
astute observation
Conventions: capitalize the pronoun I, please, that is my biggest pet peeve, line 8- id> I'd,
Most of your lines start with small letters, a couple start with capitals- (not counting the capital 'I' words) I'd be consistent,
Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Amay