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Title:Fragile- works well with your poem
Description: perfect match for what you're talking about in your piece
Contents: You've written a poem about the difficulties in moving on. Transitions in life can be so challenging, sometimes we all need someone to help us see the path we need to take. A nudge gently placed to help us over come our fears.
Thumbs up: Sometimes we must go alone,
To get where we need to be.>>> great insight revealed
Conventions: My pet peeve- capitalize the pronoun I.
Can I take the road?>> read this question with How in front>> How can I take the road? then read it the way you wrote it.... Which sounds better to you?

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