Welcome to WDC. I hope you will enjoy the time you spend here sharing your work with others. I know I've learned a lot over the past year. It's nice to find a safe place to grow in your craft.
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Description: Be sure you spell things in your description correctly, there are numerous reviewers available that won't peek into your port if your description doesn't sell your work. Make your descriptions work for you. (whether) BTW, if he feels nothing... then how could it be love or hate?
Contents: You've written a poem that seems to be about the frustrations of loving someone from a distance. I wonder if frustration builds into the anger and might be a useful emotion to add to your poem, maybe instead of fear. Of course, fear of losing someone that is loved from afar can lead to anger, too.
Thumbs up:Yet i love, and love you for all that you are,>> reveals true character

Conventions: A suggestion given to me when I first joined WDC was to slow down, read each line one at a time to make sure your fingers and brain were at the same place at the same time. Typos are hard for me to catch in my own writing if I don't read it outloud to myself.
Another lesson I've learned is to go back and look at things again after a couple of days. When you see something with fresh eyes, you tend to catch things you simply overlook. I know it really works for me.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.