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Title: very creative- thumbs up
Description: You've used your creative flair to capture your reader's imagination, should be a real draw in for your audience.
Contents: You've described a series of sounds that bring your peace and tranquility in a natural setting. There is a work- that I use in my classroom with my students. It's called Making Silence. I use breathing, to slow everything down. Their job is to listen... I love to have them make silence on the edge of the playground before we go into the classroom to write. Its amazing what all they hear.
Thumbs up: Very descriptive, action filled, wonderful work to be enjoyed by others here on WDC
Conventions: guidence is actually guidance

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Amay