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Title: Works well with the story
Description: Draws the reader in to find out about this town and character
Contents: The is the beginnings of a story about little Ickery Rose, the developer of change in the township of Monotony.
Thumbs up: Very creative story, I can easily see it as a children's book with illustrations
Conventions: The first two paragraphs need commas, and I'm probably the worse person to ask about that, lol.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.


Amay