Hello allenalien,

I thoroughly loved this piece. Perhaps it is because this scenario plays out everyday all over the world it is easily believable, but I think you made this particular version so colorful and fun that were it to happen to me I don't even think I would mind. Bravo.

This story was so very well written I can't think of a thing to suggest to improve it. I can find nothing wrong with it. It's a true five star story in my opinion.

It caught my attention from the beginning and kept me totally captivated til the very last line. Kate cast her spell on me too it seems. I thought the characters were fantastic. Kate just oozed sex appeal and Jimmy-Lee's naivete made him utterly charming.

The ending couldn't have been any funnier. I felt bad for Jimmy but not too bad since Kate did show him a hell of a good time. Excellent story thank you for sharing it. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



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