Hello,

I have to give my standard disclaimer about poetry which is I know next to nothing about it. I can't speak intelligently on style or structure all I can tell you is what I like and the impressions I get from a poem.

That being said, I have real mixed emotions about this piece. I like it because it is funny but at the same time I feel bad because it sounds like you have a drinking problem.

In my opinion the poem sounds well written. I think it flows nicely there are a few spots where the syllable count sounds off but like I said I am far from an expert.

Overall, I like the poem and would recommend it to someone else to read. I just hope it was written in fun and not as a serious problem. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



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