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![]() | Test: I am myself ![]() This story is about the thoughts and advices of a friend to another regarding society. ![]() |
Hello Hare, Wow! Okay, I don't really know how to review this so I will just tell you my thoughts and hope you take them in good spirit as I intend them. First, let me start with the positive. I think your grasp of language is beautiful. The eloquence of you prose is beyond reproach. This letter sounds to me as if it was written by a nobleman. That said... It is too much. Do you honestly correspond this way? The language is so overwrought it makes it difficult to read. In truth I could not read the whole letter. I stopped prior to halfway through. I give it 4 stars simply because I amazed that you can write in this style which to me seems to come from ages long ago. I think it is beautiful but like the motives of a flower I may find them aesthetically pleasing I will never understand them. I hope you don't think this review is too harsh it is never my intention to offend only to give honest and helpful reviews. Thank you for sharing and I hope to read more from you in the future. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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