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 Test: I am myself Open in new Window. [E]
This story is about the thoughts and advices of a friend to another regarding society.
by Hare Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Hare,

Wow! Okay, I don't really know how to review this so I will just tell you my thoughts and hope you take them in good spirit as I intend them.

First, let me start with the positive. I think your grasp of language is beautiful. The eloquence of you prose is beyond reproach. This letter sounds to me as if it was written by a nobleman. That said...

It is too much. Do you honestly correspond this way? The language is so overwrought it makes it difficult to read. In truth I could not read the whole letter. I stopped prior to halfway through.

I give it 4 stars simply because I amazed that you can write in this style which to me seems to come from ages long ago. I think it is beautiful but like the motives of a flower I may find them aesthetically pleasing I will never understand them.

I hope you don't think this review is too harsh it is never my intention to offend only to give honest and helpful reviews. Thank you for sharing and I hope to read more from you in the future.

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