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Hello kymee,

I like this poem very much. I took this as a dual meaning where the little girl's bear symbolizes any personal relationship. It really ups the ante if you think the little girl is throwing away people instead of a toy bear.

Anyway, I think you did an excellent job with this poem. It was very entertaining. I love the flow and I think the rhymes were awesome. Thank you for sharing it. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.


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